Thursday, November 3, 2016
The Closed Railroad
On the 22nd of October, 2016, I saw a big orange sign right next to the train tracks by the rec stating that the railroad is going to be closed for eight days. The railroad will be closed because constructors are fixing. If you saw that sign what would the first thing to come to your mind? For me, I had no clue what so ever. Until the crossing guard told me why they are going to close down the railroad
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In this paragraph, you did a good job when describing what you saw. One thing though is that this is in first point of view, when writing a newspaper it should be in third person point of view. Also, you might want to finish the last sentence since you didn't finish it. Lastly, remember to add in one or more grace notes.
ReplyDeleteI also happen to see that sign too, and probably other people too. Others might have also been wondering what was the cause that made the train tracks to be closed down for eight days. Your writing shows how most people might have also asked others about the sign near the train tracks.
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